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nanowrenlet ([personal profile] nanowrenlet) wrote2003-11-28 03:50 pm

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Everyone knew.

Some folks used to say, back in the days when conventional wisdom held that the world was flat and was carried around on the backs of elephants, that when the earth shook beneath your feet it was because the very pillars that supported it were trembling. This was a little like that, in that something had disrupted the order of the reapers' strange little world, and every reaper in the area -- possibly every reaper in Pittsburgh -- had felt it when it happened.

They were waiting outside the restaurant for him, all three of the other reapers, standing on the sidewalk like they had been debating with each other whether they should go in or not and Rube could tell they were each shocked and saddened by turns. Monique had Justin's messenger bag, and was holding it tightly to her chest with her arms folded across it. Brandon spoke up first.

"I knew he'd do it."

Rube didn't want to get into that just yet, whether he could or should have kept Justin away from Brian's appointment, whether Justin might have stayed if he had seen something different when Brian's time came... or whether the whole day had just been inevitable from start to finish. So instead he shrugged noncommittally and asked, "You guys hungry, or do you think you could maybe do me a favor?"

Brandon stepped forward immediately. "Are we going to his place?"

"Yep. Just need to do a bit of cleaning up."

Monique hugged the bag in her arms and nodded, and after a quick glance back at the restaurant Pete did as well. Rube cocked his head back towards his car. "I'll drive. We can pick up sandwiches on the way or something."


When they got there, Rube did the honors. The lock gave way with a satisfying click, and Rube tucked the pick back into its slim case and swung the door open, stepping aside to the let the others pass. Brandon was first into the apartment, and he let out a low whistle.

"Holy shit. Did he ever do anything -but- draw?"

Rube snorted, amused. "Yeah, he did plenty besides that. You act like you didn't help him carry half of this up the stairs."

Brandon just shrugged. "It's different. Seeing it all in boxes and seeing them out and... all over the place, like this." Rube knew what he meant. He'd seen it for himself once or twice when he'd dropped in on Justin for whatever reason, but he could still admit that it was pretty impressive.

The three reapers stood in the middle of the front room turning in slow circles, and Rube saw that they all realized what he had already known, that they couldn't leave all of this here for just anyone to find. Pete spotted a portfolio lying open on the bar counter, and started to slowly turn the pages of it. Monique stopped in front of a sketch hanging on the wall, one of Justin's many drawings of Brian, and touched it with her fingertips. "How did he look, Rube? Before he left."

She didn't have to say that she was asking about Justin, and not Brian. Rube knew. "Good. He looked... happy."

Monique nodded at that and sniffled a little, and Pete called out, "Hey, there's one of me in here."

"Probably more than one, kid drew everything he laid eyes on."

"And we're gonna pack it all up, huh?" Rube met Brandon's eyes and nodded solemnly.

It took them the rest of the afternoon and a good part of the night, and they ate through all of the sandwiches Rube had bought and had to call for takeout as well. It was slow work, slower than it might have otherwise been because they all tended to linger over it, and Rube let them. Pete found every sketch Justin had made of his fellow reapers and pulled them aside into a little pile. Monique was most fascinated by the drawings of his family, particularly the little sister. Molly, Rube remembered that that was her name, and he told Monique so. There didn't seem to be any pattern to what caught Brandon's eye -- souls Justin had taken, waiters he had worked with, scenes of that club he went to, Babylon -- but every now and then one page would be carefully set to the side as he worked.

Rube would let them take whatever they wanted. It wasn't as if Justin was going to miss the drawings, wherever he had gone, and reapers tended to mourn their losses in their own, peculiar fashions.

Brandon leaned over and looked at the paper menu Rube was holding, with its sketch of Justin's funeral on the back. "Damn, that's good."

"Yep. He had real talent." Rube hadn't seen the drawing since Justin had finished it, adding in Brian and his tree. He looked at it for a while longer, then carefully folded it along its creases, tucked it into his jacket, and stood and announced he was making a pop run.

Rube came back thirty minutes later with two six-packs, three rolls of postal service approved carton tape and a packet of shipping labels.

Brandon's eyebrows rose. "You're gonna mail them somewhere?"

Rube nodded. "Thought I'd have 'em shipped west."

"So you're leaving now, huh." It was Pete who said it, but Monique was looking up as well, expectantly.

Rube nodded again. "Sal's on his way back, they tell me, he should be here day after tomorrow." He looked around the little apartment for a minute, noting to himself what they were taking and what they were leaving behind, and added. "It's time I went home."

THE END
Final word count: 50061

[identity profile] altricial.livejournal.com 2004-01-01 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Good god, you are amazing. I go die now.

[identity profile] chinawolf.livejournal.com 2004-01-03 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*applauds* Man, you got the tone right. Justin, Brian, Rube and everybody else are pretty much in character, in itself noteworthy. And awww, your plot, it's as wonderful and painful as the whole canon arc surrounding the bashing itself.

Like all the other commenters, I have to congratulate you on your OCs, they're believable and likable - and cute! :D

Oh, this story rocks so much! So proud of you for finishing this in an impressive four weeks. You are awe-inspiring. I'm so glad Anna's post today got me to stumble over here and start reading. \:D/
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BRAVO!!!!

[identity profile] phibetafunkay.livejournal.com 2004-01-03 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG - I'm speechless...just speechless, and in awe.
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Wow.

[personal profile] taichou 2004-01-05 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I realize I've never commented before (even though I've practically stalked all your works), but I couldn't NOT tell you how completely wonderful this was.

Wow. Just wow.

There are no words to describe how well you captured all the characters, all the feelings, all the themes...just everything. I don't usually do crossovers...but this was truly excellent and you captured the very soul of each show perfectly.

Hell. I felt like I was watching the two shows merge into one. That's how great it was. And honestly, no fic, not one, has ever made me cry. Not like this...not like I'm doing now. Not balling my eyes out because it was so sweet and so painful at the same time. Amazing job.

Just amazing.

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-01-06 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :) OCs are always such a risk, but you know... the NaNo format really helped me there, because instead of second-guessing their inclusion and maybe trimming down scenes and/or talking myself out of them entirely, I got to yell, "Aaaaahhh word count!" and let them do what they wanted to do.

Ahh, no awe! I'm not awe-inspiring, I'm just nuts :) But thank you anyway!

Re: BRAVO!!!!

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-01-06 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
OMG - I'm speechless...just speechless, and in awe.

Thank you :)

Re: Wow.

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-01-06 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
even though I've practically stalked all your works

Hee! Really? :D

Thank you :) That's about the best compliment you can give me, really, that you feel I stayed true to the spirit of both series. I wanted to, I hoped to, and hearing that it works for people on that level is just... wheeee! Thank you :)

*hands you tissue*

I know I am extremely late to this party Wrenlet ...

[identity profile] zosha2003.livejournal.com 2004-02-05 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
... but I just found Reaper Justin today. I spent the last couple of hours reading - and the last 20 minutes crying.

Only a few other stories have touched this place in me. Thank you so much.

Re: I know I am extremely late to this party Wrenlet ...

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-02-09 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahh, there's no such thing as late :) (Okay, unless you're talking about my abortive attempts to get this edited and reposted, but uhm...)

Thank you, it really means a lot to me to know how many of you this story has moved.

[identity profile] sunshine-kin.livejournal.com 2004-02-18 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Loves.

This is so beautiful, and I am crying so hard. Oh, and they're so happy.

I loved the way it was written, especially the "Rube knew" teasers at the beginning of each cut. Thank *goodness* I didn't know about this story until it was completed. I would have torn my hair out waiting.

Twu luff. *sniff*.

PS: I added you to my friends list, hope you don't mind!

[identity profile] valerie-z.livejournal.com 2004-02-19 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
::sob::

I shouldn't have re-read this. It broke my heart into a million tiny pieces. Again. I love it so much, Wren, you horrible sadistic person.

Excuse me, I have to go cry myself to death.

[identity profile] amelialourdes.livejournal.com 2004-02-21 10:58 am (UTC)(link)
That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Thank you.

*gives you a standing ovation*

[identity profile] cherprudence.livejournal.com 2004-03-11 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
WOW. This is like.. A Life Achievement!!! I couldnt begin praising you enough!!!! THE PAIN WAS WORTH IT!!!

[identity profile] kitkatbyte.livejournal.com 2004-07-11 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW. This entire fic was absolutely beautiful. And I love how you ended it, with all of Justin's drawings... I do feel a little sad, kind of like the reapers that got left behind... the world has lost something with Justin being gone. But I'm left to imagine Brian and Justin, happy and together. :D

WOW

[identity profile] mi-nion.livejournal.com 2004-07-15 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I just stumbled onto this fic today.

I wasn't sure about the crossover premise, but damn! This was good.
Bittersweet and schmoopy and GOOD.

Mind if I friend you?

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, comments I didn't see! Eek!

Thank you so much :) This journal only gets used once a year, though, check my main info page for links to the fiction journal and my site.

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*blush* Ovations! Thank you :)

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Heehee... my pain, or their pain? ;) Thank you :)

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Happy and together... happy and together... we hope :D (Honestly, I fear what the second season of DLM might say about Betty and her eventual fate. Fear.)

And thank you!

Re: WOW

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Crossovers are a very hard sell, I didn't expect nearly the response I got for this story. Thank you :)

This journal will only be used once a year (at most), if you're interested in my other fics, check my main info page for the ficjournal and my website. That said, no need to ask permission to friend any of my journals :)

[identity profile] kitkatbyte.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
NO! Happy and together! It's where Justin belongs!

[identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't tell me, tell the DLM writers! *crosses fingers*

SundaySundaySunday

Re: WOW

[identity profile] mi-nion.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
is that the nono wro project?

[identity profile] cherprudence.livejournal.com 2004-07-20 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehehe, everyones pain? ^__~ hope to read more of your stuff oh so soon!

[identity profile] amelialourdes.livejournal.com 2004-07-24 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
A crossover fic with two of my all time favorite shows? How can you go wrong?! You just can't and you made everything fit perfectly.

Me thinks I'll go read it again.

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