I have never been so happy to see Brian and Justin dead.

*giggle* Thank you :)

But you really don't think this is potentially crappy, do you?

Well, I've been so close to it for so long... I just found out last night, not everyone realized I really was posting this as it got written, no eyes on it but mine and no going back to fix older sections. There were things I did and tangents I took 'cause of word count and general moodiness and... I guess I was worried that some parts didn't hold up as well as others, as that's the kind of thing that gets fixed in editing. And, plus, trying to type while you're bawling is hard, man! Overall, no, I'm horribly proud of this story. But boy howdy does it need a whack with the editing stick :)